I believe this is very necessary from an editor's point of view.

The only thing I've settled on is the heroine's name.

It is to be AVERIL LESTER.

Rather pretty, don't you think?
Don't mention this to any one, Diana.

I haven't told anybody but you and Mr.Harrison.HE wasn't very encouraging--he said there was far too much trash written nowadays as it was, and he'd expected something better of me, after a year at college." "What does Mr.Harrison know about it ?" demanded Diana scornfully.
They found the Gillis home gay with lights and callers.