'You must mark in these things obviously.

It's the fact you want to emphasise, not the subjective impression to record.
What's the fact ?--red little spiky stigmas of the female flower, dangling yellow male catkin, yellow pollen flying from one to the other.

Make a pictorial record of the fact, as a child does when drawing a face--two eyes, one nose, mouth with teeth--so--' And he drew a figure on the blackboard.
At that moment another vision was seen through the glass panels of the door.

It was Hermione Roddice.

Birkin went and opened to her.
'I saw your car,' she said to him.